Verbal Feedback on Rough cut
After viewing and receiving feedback our rough cut it is clear that we need to redo some shots to iron out creases that don't match up in the storyline.
The part of the opening where the serial killer is pursuing his victim in the car isn't clear to the fact that he is in the car as there is a shot of her walking and the car following her and then it cuts straight to the serial killer walking down the street right behind his victim. We now need to either reshoot these shot and show the link between the serial killer and the car or more likely to scrap the idea of the car pursuit and go straight to the serial killer following his victim on the street this will also build more tension and have more opportunities to make interesting match cuts.
The part of the opening where the serial killer is pursuing his victim in the car isn't clear to the fact that he is in the car as there is a shot of her walking and the car following her and then it cuts straight to the serial killer walking down the street right behind his victim. We now need to either reshoot these shot and show the link between the serial killer and the car or more likely to scrap the idea of the car pursuit and go straight to the serial killer following his victim on the street this will also build more tension and have more opportunities to make interesting match cuts. 
We also was made aware during the feedback that the shot of the phone needs to last longer this can easily be solved in editing and use more of the original clip which lasts a bit longer in order for people to read all the messages that appear on the phone to help make the narrative clearer and give a reason for her to leave the party.
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